Write an article on how our company participated in a charity event

Hali: Closed
Zawadi: $70
Wasilisho Zilizopokelewa: 19
Mshindi: rwilsher

Winner

Maelezo ya Shindano

I require an article written about how our company participated in a charity event/cause. It will then be placed onto the blog section of a charity site, so it will need to be of good quality.

The article will be between 300-400 words.

Experienced writers only,please.

I don’t want a writer who will write in a direct essay/report format without thinking about the flow/tone. It should fit in with the blog sections of a charity website like the examples here, http://goo.gl/0A49n3 and http://goo.gl/vezTJn .

As you can see in the links, its not boring sounding which just narrates the event, it includes statements and other context relevant to to the topic. So some creativity will need to be used.

Please open topic.docx to see information see the company name and the type of charity event it will be so you know what to write on.

Please see badexample.png image to see the type of article I don’t want, if you compare it with the 2 links I sent above, you can see they’re clearly different.

Budget is $70 which I think is fair.

If you have any questions, please message me and I will reply when I am available, good luck!

Ujuzi unaopendekezwa

Uandishi wa Ubunifu

Winner

Tuma Shindano kama Hili

Maoni ya Muajiri

“Roger has provided brilliant work and i look forward to working with him in the future.”

Adrian344, United Kingdom.

Bodi ya Ufafanuzi ya Umma

Triol123
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Thanks for the information. I stopped working.
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Mwenye Shindano
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I will be awarding the contest now as mentioned before already extended it longer than normal. Thank you all for your entries
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Triol123
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Please do not close earlier. I am preparing the final draft. Kind regards.
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GwiseTiger
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Sorry about submitting a little late; but kindly consider (and rate) #38 as well.
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aliqii
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Are you the main organisers? Please confirm. Thank you.
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1. aliqii
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  In my proposed submission, you're just participants. Is that so? Or were you co-organisers or even the organisers? That's the only thing keeping me from submitting. Thanks.
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2. Mwenye Shindano
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  This should have been clear from the instructions i gave on the project description, none of the other writers had issue so i dont see whats stopping you :)
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Mwenye Shindano
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please submit your entries in no longer than 12 to 14 hours, as I will be picking the winning entry on Wednesday morning around 11 AM GMT
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Mwenye Shindano
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3/5 for vale90bonomo, but please style it more like the example articles.
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Mwenye Shindano
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Between 3/5 and 4/5 for entry 27 by rjmconne. To any new entries, please read my feedback on his entry for guidance. Improvements needed.
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Mwenye Shindano
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1/5 for entry 25 by medboub, very off topic.
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Mwenye Shindano
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1/5 for entry 23 by Tandra, it's just way off from what i require.
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Mwenye Shindano
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4.2/5 for entry 24 by rwilsher, please see his article for guidance as this is along the right lines. Some improvements needed however.
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pesh0man
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dear contest holder, please don`t close the contest before the deadline :)
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1. Mwenye Shindano
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  Yeah, i award on the last day. But please dont leave submissions to the last minute as i am checking the work daily.
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Mwenye Shindano
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4.2/5 for entry 20 by rjmccone, some improvements needed.
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Mwenye Shindano
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4.1/5 for entry 18 by rjmccone, some improvements needed.
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Mwenye Shindano
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2.6/5 for entry 16 by basithashmi
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Mwenye Shindano
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2.7/5 for entry 13 by svetti
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Mwenye Shindano
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2.2/5 for entry 12 by wachirafreelance
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Mwenye Shindano
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2.5/5 for entry 19 by Lijepamila
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rjmccone
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Hi, Sorry I think I accidentally deleted my 3rd draft #18 and then resubmitted it (trying to view it from my phone was a bad idea) so if you had feedback for that article it may need to be placed again - apologies for the disruption. Ryan
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Mwenye Shindano
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2.7/5 for entry 15 by naafaynabeel
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Mwenye Shindano
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1/5 for entry 17 by imperturbable54
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RNUR29
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Hello,I just saw your contest and the files you have uploaded,topic.docx. It only contains the company's name and the name of the charity and its venue.This information is not sufficient to write a full fledged article.Will you please provide important information (quotes,venue,date)?
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1. Mwenye Shindano
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  Which information do you require apart from this? If you look at rjmconne and haryfisher's entry you can see theyre on the right track.
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Mwenye Shindano
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3.8/5 for entry 8 by rjmconne, he is getting there and is along the right track. some imrpovement needed. good work so far. Please see comments on entry.
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Mwenye Shindano
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1.9/5 for entry 7 by sislie68. This is going off track and sounds too informal and rather comical.
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Mwenye Shindano
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1/5 for entry 9 by Anamrshaikh. I'm only givign 1 star for the effort and nothing else. As he has just copied from the original document, and parts of his articles dont make sense at all.
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Mwenye Shindano
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2.8/5 for entry 10 by Lijepamila's , he has got some parts right and some parts wrong, please see comments on the entry.
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Mwenye Shindano
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1/5 fir entry 11 by supersystemng, he has failed to read the job description, and is going completely off track, please see comments on his entry
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Mwenye Shindano
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2/5 for entry 3 by sislie86, it sounds too informal/non-serious
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Mwenye Shindano
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3/5 for entry 5 by rjmccone, please see my comments on his entry for guidance.
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Mwenye Shindano
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3/5 for entry 6 by harryfisher, please see my comments on his entry for guidance.
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PamChng
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Hi, just to clarify - is the example attachment you provided the same event your organization participated in? Also, you did not provide details about the event and your organization (if different from the example), e.g. date, venue, what the charity does, info about your organization, why you participated, and any quotes that can be included. Thanks.
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1. Mwenye Shindano
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  I have posted the details of this in topic.docx, with the organization name, type of event. If you have any specific questions let me know.
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Mwenye Shindano
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in regards to Entry #3 of 3 - as you can see its not quite like the original articles i posted in the job description, hence i gave it a 2 stars. It doesnt contain any speeches either, it also looks a bit chunky.
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Mwenye Shindano
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Upgraded to guaranteed.
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