Bodi ya Ufafanuzi ya Umma

  • jaylopez999
    Mwenye Shindano
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    1. Can you make the bullets be aligned on the middle horizontal plane with the words next to that bullet?
    2. on "help trauma patients" the next word should be "and"
    3. next line is "Build a Good Safe Device"
    4. Make all bullet text use initial caps
    5. Make the "We Affect Lives" [

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    1. Pedro1973
      Pedro1973
      • Miaka 10 iliyopita

      sure, i can make the changes, sorry about errors

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  • jaylopez999
    Mwenye Shindano
    • Miaka 10 iliyopita

    There also needs to be clear progression on starting with the "what", moving to the "how" and ending up at our "why".

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  • jaylopez999
    Mwenye Shindano
    • Miaka 10 iliyopita

    make the "We Affect Lives" the most important thing. Check the spelling for "affect".

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