Bodi ya Ufafanuzi ya Umma

  • IElite2010
    Mwenye Shindano
    • Miaka 10 iliyopita

    WOW! Nice. OK, top first - First, the firetowers are always on the mountains, never on the ground. Secondly, The logo should be transparent, therefore, no white below the the sords the white road shouldnt have grey in it, it should be transparent. Also, the logo snould be centered. Next, one or mountains should be taller and possible one or more closer in view (possibly left center) where you can put the firetower on it. Ok, the bottom one. Love it also. Please remove plane. Also, same thing with logo , should be transparent. The word bucket list should be capitalized like the one in the top. I like the word adirondack in Brown. it might be interesting to see both logos like that - i dont know. To replace the place, I think you should add a lake or pond sceene - GREAT FIRST ATTEMPT!

    • Miaka 10 iliyopita
    1. Designer0713
      Designer0713
      • Miaka 10 iliyopita

      Hi! Thanks a lot for your feedback, I am gonna do the adjustments! :)

      • Miaka 10 iliyopita