Design a new membership page for a Bookshop

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Membership Page for the Bookshop

Hi, I just want to note that what I've done is actually the HTML and CSS. I know you asked for a PSD, but it was easier for me to do it this way and I thought this might also cut your work a little bit. Thank you very much for your consideration.

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  • R7Sh
    R7Sh
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    Thank you very much for the feedback. I'll try to change it according to your feedback and upload a revised version before the deadline.

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  • bogreolen
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    Also, how will this look (with all the changes as well) on mobile?
    Looking forward to seeing the changes.

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  • bogreolen
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    - We are not really digging the offset-squares for the benefit-section. Something more simple will do just fine.

    - The membership steps are a nice concept but there are too many "shine effects". It looks decent but it is a little too much for our style.
    Also the plans are not "selectable". The customer unlocks each step after having been member for a certain amount of time.
    So we do not need the sign up buttons in the buttom. Also it would be nice for step 3 to be "key". It is the last and best step, so we would like to advertise it as such as well graphically.

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  • bogreolen
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    - In general the design needs to be a little less "cooperate" and more of a simple style with our color palet. The use of green is great but it also becomes a little doll.

    - The first section needs to be more selling. Also the background is not exactly right in terms of what we want to get across. The customer should either see a lot of books or have it be more of a loose and "cozy" mood background.

    - The video thumbnail needs to be a part of the first section as well (just a small thumbnail with a play icon).

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  • bogreolen
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    Thank you for submitting. It will be fine with HTML and CSS if that suits you better.

    This is a decent contribution but we have the following concerns:

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