Ikechukwu O.

Great job!

Sadly, the quite a lot of editing was required. I would notably say that there were phrases and words that one would not find in modern English, such as using "Peradventure" instead of "Perhaps". There was stray from the brief, despite earlier communication to correct this; A requirement was to remain objective and factual, something which was not adhered to. The American English test mark of 80% is not an accurate indicator of a suppliers ability to write in modern or accurate English. There were also odd sentences placed within the work that were either incomplete or out of place. Some parts of the work were written as if meant to be spoken rather than read.

Great