Hi, I've already edited your script this morning. I"ve changed the script so the English sounds more natural, and rewritten to emphasize your service as appropriate. Neat Idea! I like it.
Relevant Skills and Experience
Script editing, Voice acting, Voice over, Sound mixing, background music
Proposed Milestones
$30 USD - I'll deliver edited script if you hire me, immediately, it's already done. Consider hiring me for VO
Additional Services Offered
$50 USD - Voice over and deliver all lines in any digital format you like within 2 days.
Line 14. doesn't work for the traveler. The purchase cost of the item at least must go to the traveler or your actually making their financial situation worse. Any additional funds agreed upon over purchase cost could be held until delivery, for editing sake, I'm going to assume this is what you meant.