Need someone to proof read and make my "blog" post for my knew photography website better and making it sound more creative/professional

I have just started my photography business, and just started creating a website for all my new photos. I would like someone to read my "about me" part in my bio [BELOW], and basically make it sound better. I've never been a creative writer, or even just a good writer at that and need some help. I have some other parts in my website I would like something written as well just to catch customer's eyes, if someone is interested in that as well! But for now my main concern is my bio. ' If interested in helping me write out little descriptions/ eye catchers for the "weddings", "sports", or "Senior Pictures" tab please let me know! This should be some quick and easy cash for whoever wants to help! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ "Born and raised in Branson, Missouri, and now living in the big town of Ames, Oklahoma. I would have never thought to be where I am now, but I am in awe of the beauty of the Oklahoma pastures and the ability to see miles and miles of the bright blue sky. And luckily for me I get to share it all with the love of my life, Kyler.  Sports have always been a huge part of both of our lives, and in fact that's how we ended up meeting, playing a quick game of pick up. Who would have thought that two basketball junkies would end up doing photography?  All I know is no matter what I choose to do in life, I know I have Kyler by my side, and he is incredible at supporting anything I do. Lucky for me he will be by my side for most of our photography shoots always giving me an extra opinion in making our photos better. Photography for me first started when I was in little league basketball and my Dad was on the sidelines of EVERY SINGLE game taking snapshots of my sister and I. He did this for all my games up to High School, and he was an AMAZING sport photographer. My Dad took photos specifically for us kids, and never really had the time to do much more with photography because of work.  Pondering back on how much his photography impacted my life and looking at photos that bring back memories that I may have never remembered if it wasn't for my Dad, is why I want to use photography to impact others lives in memories they can always keep by their side. This is why I first started out with sport photography. Now that my photography business is expanding, I have gained an all new appreciation for life itself and the beauty photography brings out. Thank you for taking the time to check out my photography page, and I hope to be the one to make your memories last forever! " AN EXAMPLE of what I am looking for is what this photographer did [login to view URL] Check out her "collections" tab for examples on her other writings she did.