Hi. I can read your story and offer suggestions for improvments. Although I live in Brazil now, I´m an American writer, researcher, editor, proofreader and translator, a native English speaker with excellent language skills and years of experience revising books for authors of all kinds. During the past year, I have assisted the authors of 2 supernatural thrillers, a collection of romantic short stories, 2 non-fiction self-improvement books (one about intuition and "mental powers"), the biography of an American musician and the story of a Chinese monk´s search for enlightenment. I can use Track Changes to show you all my corrections, comments and suggestions in your text, and do my utmost to avoid interfering in your own personal writing style. I bid low here because, in order to determine how much time and work your project will require, I need to know the number of words in the text, and if possible look the story over first. I´d be glad to sign a Non-Disclosure Agreement to protect your author´s rights. Please contact me with information about the story, and I would be very glad to work with you on this. Best, David