SUBJECT line for an email campaign (& some email text wording)

Hali: Closed
Zawadi: $25
Wasilisho Zilizopokelewa: 3

Maelezo ya Shindano

This initial contest is to help me decide who should receive the whole contract.

The winner will be the person (or persons) who can write a subject line that will get the email opened. I can test different subject lines. Any tie-breakers can be for the selling sentences you may have within an email draft.

"How to Study More Effectively" is a book written a few years ago. I wish to give away my book to people, especially students. You can read download it now, and read it at your leisure.

There is to be no charge for the email recipients who want to have an electronic version of my text.

What is very important, to me, is to have my book available to as many students as are willing to accept the gift.

The subject line is critical. In my opinion, the subject line is more important than the wording of the sales letter.

Attached is a copy of the work I wish to give away to the recipients of the email

As a bonus, for you (and the students), I have attached a copy of The Seven Segment Solution. This is a one-page rendition of techniques and tips I offered to help people build wealth. I am now retired, so I would like the Seven Segment Solution to be given to as many people as can, perhaps, profit from this single page.

If you are willing, please let me know what you think of the few pages in the opening chapter of the book for students. Those few pages should take only a few minutes to read. It can help you understand why I am not selling my book. I just want as many people as practical to be exposed to the book.

The opening chapter may help convey my desire.

Fair enough?

Ujuzi unaopendekezwa

Kutangaza Kwa Wingi

Tuma Shindano kama Hili

Wasilisho kuu kwenye hili shindano

giuliachicco92 United Kingdom

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ArtisticVision India

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nilotpalkalita India

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Bodi ya Ufafanuzi ya Umma

Laowaiman2009
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Hello -- I went back and rearranged the email copy and email subjects so they are in order in the comments section.
Email subjects: 1. This Gift Will Help Students Get Better Grades
2. Dear Students: A Gift Inside To Make Your Grades Better
3. A Gift Inside To Help You Get Better Grades, Student
4. This Free Ebook Will Help You Get Better Grades
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Laowaiman2009
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Email copy (the copy is spread out in this comment and the two below it):
Dear Student,
Getting good grades is extremely important for your future. But studying is hard for you and you may lack confidence when you take tests.
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Laowaiman2009
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It doesn’t have to be so hard. You too can get outstanding grades!

And, you don't need to have a super-high IQ.

Harry L. Johns (name bolded), an education expert, has developed a system that helps students on many education levels (middle school, high school, college, graduate, etc.) improve their study methods and work ethic. This leads to much better grades.

Your new Ebook attached to this email -- How to Study More Effectively (this title should be bolded) -- is easy to read and has simple steps you can follow to start improving today.
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Laowaiman2009
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It shows you how to:

- Stop procrastinating
- Become more disciplined
- Take better notes
- Prepare yourself for a test -
- And much, much, more!

It's time to start believing in yourself. You can become one of the best students in your class!

Sincerely Yours,

Harry L. Johns

P.S. --

There is something else attached to this email that you need to see if you are a young person. You have the ability to plan for and achieve a successful financial future. Open and read my straightforward guide, The Seven Segment Solution, and you will understand what it takes to retire early and enjoy lifelong financial security!
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Laowaiman2009
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(3rd part) The book shows you how to:

- Stop procrastinating
- Become more disciplined
- Take better notes
- Prepare yourself for a test

… And much, much, more!

Position yourself to achieve and start building a brighter future today!

Sincerely Yours,

Mr. Harry L. Johns

P.S. --

Financial security and prosperity are, well, priceless. Also attached to this email is “The Seven Segment Solution,” an amazingly helpful financial management guide for young people interested in retiring early.
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Laowaiman2009
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(2nd part of email copy): Harry L. Johns (name bolded), an education expert, has developed a system anyone can use. It is designed to help middle school students and anyone else who needs to improve their study methods and work ethic.

Your new Ebook, “How to Study More Effectively (title bolded),” is attached to this email.

The book shows you how to:
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Laowaiman2009
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email copy: Getting good grades is important to you.

But studying is hard for you and you may lack confidence. It doesn’t have to be so hard. You can get good grades like anyone else.

And you don’t need to have a super-high IQ to do it. By following the steps in the ebook attached to this email, you can become one of the best students in your class.
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Laowaiman2009
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email subject lines:

1. The Gift In This Email Will Help Students Study Better
2. Dear Students: A Gift For You Inside
3. There’s A Gift Inside For You, Student
4. This Free Ebook Will Help You Study More Effectively
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Laowaiman2009
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I didn't come across this contest to submit an entry in time, so I'm posting the content I wrote here on the Clarification Board.
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Laowaiman2009
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I missed the entry deadline by about 1 minute. #extended
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