Freelancer: pratamafadhil
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This is my second entry. A more abstract and simplified version. Thanks

Wasilisho la Shindano #44 la E-Khattaba Logo

Bodi ya Ufafanuzi ya Umma

  • mohammedhaddad88
    mohammedhaddad88
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    show time

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  • LaCynn
    LaCynn
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    NICE!

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  • popohouse15
    popohouse15
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    very excellent logo

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  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
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    Hi, I've uploaded the revised version at entry #80 .

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  • saraalmudhaf
    Mwenye Shindano
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    I like the contrast in face size of the man's and woman's. I like that they are asymmetrical, not identical, and not a reflection.

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  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
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    Sure, right away.

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  • saraalmudhaf
    Mwenye Shindano
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    I like how you filled the gap between the man's chin and woman's nose with a beard. So useful and very well utilized. However, I am not a fan of the negative space under the woman's chin. Would you experiment with that please or just close it up or minimize it. Thanks

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  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
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    Thank you four the insight. i will get back to you right away.

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  • saraalmudhaf
    Mwenye Shindano
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    Try using the same mustache for the woman's lips. Change color and reflect (upside-down). Try slightly bigger eyes for both without eyelash for woman. This is also a characteristic of Arabian eyes. Try again a closed eye for the womanonly, this time with eyelash. I like the idea of the blush for the woman but not so much the execution (the blur). It is not in harmony with the whole style. I like the shadow of the ear and chin.

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    1. saraalmudhaf
      Mwenye Shindano
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      I believe closed eyes will successfully communicate a forehead kiss and support the current position of the man over the woman. Check entry #47 for reference.

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  • saraalmudhaf
    Mwenye Shindano
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    I love the color scheme.

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  • saraalmudhaf
    Mwenye Shindano
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    I'm very happy.

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  • saraalmudhaf
    Mwenye Shindano
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    Try to experiment with the gold headpiece for the woman. It would add more cultural context. Try to unify all gold stroke thickness including the black headpiece for the man (one thickness). Thank you.

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    1. saraalmudhaf
      Mwenye Shindano
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      Entries #47 #36

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  • saraalmudhaf
    Mwenye Shindano
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    I like the digital pattern design. Works very well with e- as in digital or electronic.

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  • saraalmudhaf
    Mwenye Shindano
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    I can see a heart (right one). I like it.

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  • saraalmudhaf
    Mwenye Shindano
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    I love it.

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  • saraalmudhaf
    Mwenye Shindano
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    This is so far my very best! Thank you.

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