Create a Video for my game

Hali: Closed
Zawadi: $215
Wasilisho Zilizopokelewa: 8
Mshindi: cozminvoicu

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Mwenye Shindano
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Hi guy... Sorry for late. I think i found the best one (with a little modify). https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QN8TUY-KMtA
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1. cozminvoicu
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  Thanks LunnikaHoro!
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2. cozminvoicu
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  Thank you, cfkhanh, for your patience...it`s been really 10 days of hard work.
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imaginesoil
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Hey! Congrats cozminvoicu . . .cheers :)
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1. cozminvoicu
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  Thank you, imaginesoil.cheers!
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creativecoolmz
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congrats
cozminvoicu
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1. cozminvoicu
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  Thanks creativecoolmz!
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creativecoolmz
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Is there any chance for runners?
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1. Mwenye Shindano
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  But my budget is limited. May be after receive revenue from the app.
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2. LunnikaHoro
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  I think It will be great if You give some bonus for runners, but if only You think it necessary =)
  Anyway, the winner`s trailer are great)
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Mwenye Shindano
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Hi all. The contest was expanded too long and I want to close it soon. I will close contest at 19:00 (24h from now). So, please send the modify before that time.
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1. Mwenye Shindano
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  cfkhanh - googlemail
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imaginesoil
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Hi, how long this contest will be open?
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cozminvoicu
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can you please expand the contest for 1 day more ? I`m working on an animation and I need at least 12 hours more, I already have 6 days of work, so please expand the contest 1 day, or at least 12 hours...Thanks
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1. Mwenye Shindano
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  Hi Cozminvoicu, If you can't post video here, let send me via email.
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2. Mwenye Shindano
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  You're so hard working.
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Mwenye Shindano
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Anyone hasn't upload video yet? Can I choose the winner?
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1. cozminvoicu
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  I made a new animation and I believe that you will not be disappointed.
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2. LunnikaHoro
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  I`ll send new version to You in next hour
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imaginesoil
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Hi, Please check your mail or #13 for the updated video link . .Thanks
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1. Mwenye Shindano
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  You set the video to private
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2. imaginesoil
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  I've changed it Please Check again . . Thank you
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imaginesoil
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Uploading . . .
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RJBowden
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I will upload my version in the next 2 days, just starting the animation now.
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1. Mwenye Shindano
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  Glad to heard that. Waiting for your video!
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2. Mwenye Shindano
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  If you can't upload video, email me
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Mwenye Shindano
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4. cozminvoicu #15
You choose the hard way than other freelancer, I think you must invested your time too much. I think with my art, you did the best thing.
If your choose this concept, you must to do several animations.
Good:
- Intro logo simple
- The great story
- Impress music
Not Good:
- The color of my logo, character
- The hero with closed eyes, look like he was blinded
- The scene when enemies appear is too much think, too much enemies, not clear. You can use your first video with bat and birds flying out but without my designed enemies
- Can't comment the screne you show the friends were kidnapped. Good ideas but bad animation.
- Redundant scene (press play button)
- The game play scenes which you show were little long and weren't best scene.
- The last footage is too much text, too much information, wrong logo, bad design
My Rate: 3.8/5
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1. cozminvoicu
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  Thanx for your time to explain what`s right and wrong and also for expanding the time of the contest! I really appreciate.
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creativecoolmz
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hi there,Please give your sugesstions about #19
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1. Mwenye Shindano
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  Hi. Thank you. I don't want to waste your time and other freelancers. So, I will review 1 time at the end of contest and decide the winner.
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2. creativecoolmz
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  Thank you for the feedback that you have given to me.Its a new experience for me to create a video for game trailer.Enjoyed a lot.Likes to work with you again.Lets hope for the best.Thanks for the support cfkhanh.
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creativecoolmz
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Any changes let me know i will modify it.Thanks
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moonblue95
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game chuoi chuoi
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1. Mwenye Shindano
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  ?
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imaginesoil
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Hi, Thank you for the feedback . M going to start working on it. will provide complete video within 2 days . I have some confusions which m trying to discuss . could you provide me your mail id Please. thanks
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1. Mwenye Shindano
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  You can contact: cfkhanh (googlemail)
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Mwenye Shindano
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Below are my comments from the video, what do you thinks guy?
And I also expand the contest to 3 days. After you modify as my comments, I'll review again and choose the winner.
Thank you again, very much!
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1. creativecoolmz
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  https://www.dropbox.com/s/b279qz27bnbez8z/Final_v2.avi?dl=0
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2. creativecoolmz
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  check out this link
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Mwenye Shindano
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3. creativecoolmz ( #11 )
Good:
- Choose proper game play scene to show
- Perfect music, specially when you display text or change scene
Not Good:
- Font of text
- Last footaage ( No need comming soon, don't display any info, just title of game).
My Rate: 3.9/5
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Mwenye Shindano
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2. imaginesoil's video ( #13 )
Good:
- Music is perfect from start to the end.
- Content display is simple and clearly
Not Good:
- When you change from story to intro features of game, you should find better way (ex: display Fantasy Fight text)
- The font is a little like with action game (like mavel game).
If you can change a little more, I think your video is best and exactly what I want. Clearly and simple.
+ Intro company logo (by different and simple way from other scenes)
+ Introducing the story by text
+ Show all best scenes of game (Change characters, background, scene..)
+ Display Fantasy Fight text (or the banner)
+ Introducing features by text
+ Go to last footage
My Rate: 4.3/5
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Mwenye Shindano
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Hi guys,
I really happy and want to say thanks to all freelancers joined the contest.
Specially the owners of 4 stars video: hamzakrissaane, imaginesoil, creativecoolmz and cozminvoicu. I think you guy hard-working to create the good video.
As you know, I didn't provide to you proper art graphic and this also effect to quality of video and I didn't tell you how to make it (script).
But, with my opinion as a user don't about video producer, just feel as seeing user, I think:
1. hamzakrissaane's videos ( #7 ):
Good:
- Proper music
- Last footage(not music) is great
- Logo intro is great
Not Good
- Content has a little bore
- Same background from start to end
My Rate: 4.0/5
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creativecoolmz
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I think the contest ends up in very short time that is the main reason.Freelancers give their best.Also hamzakrissaane,cozminvoicu,imaginesoil works are appreciated.
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1. imaginesoil
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  Hey! thanks creativecoolmz . ..I also admire your work .. cheers. .:)
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2. hamzakrissaane
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  Thnak you creativecoolmz :)
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Mwenye Shindano
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I reviewed all of the videos but still can't find the high quality video. Maybe you need more time or my price is too low, not enough to do high quality video? My information (include art graphic) is not enough to make quality video?
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1. Mwenye Shindano
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  Tomorrow mean in 24h later
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2. hamzakrissaane
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  okay will be waiting
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imaginesoil
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I don't know if it's about the prize money . But i think if you really want to come up with some thing like "shadow fight" you must have the proper graphics (customized for animation),cinematic backgrounds (detailed) , proper sound design, Engaging Plot and of course more time.
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1. Mwenye Shindano
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  Thank for your feedback. I don't know about video and how to make it. I provided all of graphic (background, logo, character vector,...). I think we need more time.
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